The Fish Catch
"Do we have to go" I said dragging my feet, "yes It's going to be fun" said captain. Fine I'll go, that's the spirt, so I went on boat and it was called The White Flame.
It sounds abit odd I was stuned, Then captin stared to speak and said " we must catch the the blue sardemon "
eye eye captin then hours and hours past by captian I saw a pull and It took me right in the water swimming through the lake.
I ened at shore and caught the fish I celebrated in joy captin said " tomorrow we will put it in a tank.
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