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100 wc week 5




                                                     
                                                             My Most Wonderful Treasure


Every day It sits by my window and It is very shiny when it is reflect off the sun. It has a vibrant red string attached to It  and sometimes when the wind blows by you can hear it but it is not very loud. It is very special to me, because it was a present from Santa. I did not actually ask for It. Since I requested for some magic powder but which I did not get It. I would never give It away, because when It rings that means you believe in Christmas which  I do.

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  1. Unknown14 October 2017 at 13:45

    Is it a jingle bell? I like how you have used adjectives such as shiny to describe your it. "It" does not need to be capitalized in the middle of a sentence.

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  2. Unknown18 October 2017 at 10:26

    Your story is very mysterious and it was exciting to read. Great job on using comma's and periods to make the story flow perfectly!

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