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100 WC week 7



                                                                 On The Ferry



" Come on let's go were going to be late!" I shouted to my brother. Today is a big day we are going on a cruise.
 We made it to the ferry but we still had to pay for our tickets. So my father went to buy them, but it was packed like an stamped of rhino's.
" Hello only 2 minutes in till boarding "a man said in a deep voice, "my father is over there trying to get through the line"
 I said back to him.
"okay hurry up were almost full"
 then the doors slam whoosh! and that moment I knew that we are not boarding the cruise.

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  1. Unknown27 October 2017 at 12:56

    Be sure to read it out loud to your self as you are missing some things. Also, work on the punctuation especially when someone is speaking. Look at the rules for quotation if you need a reminder. (Capitals, commas, new lines when a new person is speaking....)

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