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100 wc week 3

                                                 
         
                                                    The Difficult Day



One day we were at an animal zoo and I was enjoying  a delicious sticky purple cotton candy. Then I heard something strange from the petting centre there stood a furious crocodile in shriek of pain. So I went up to it and saw the crocodile had it's tail all twisted up. Then I heard someone shout call the professor! The professor came steaming out of his office. What is happening out here! Then he saw the crocodile so he wen't up to his cage but the crocodile was smart so he sweep him off his feet and said this is difficult.

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  1. Unknown29 September 2017 at 15:28

    A creative story. When someone is speaking use quotation marks and a new line to indicate they are speaking. I am a little confused about how the crocodile was able to sweep the professor off his feed if there is a cage in between them.

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